by Galloglaich
It was an interesting continuation of the story the only problem is that it was such a long time between chapters that I had to go back to Ch 20 to refresh my memory as to what was going on.
if you need time take it. just know you're one hell of a writer.
Just let it go at its own pace. You have a lot invested in this story and it would be a shame to rush it now. I have been following this for a while and it is very original and interesting. It is nice to see some of the other character's perspectives. I'm looking forward to more, maybe dealing with the succubi and where they are. Good job.
Will you be continuing your series, Galloglaich? I'm pretty sure I'm not the only one waiting for my dose of the drug that is your writing :)
Writing is a tool and a craft, like any tool it must be sharpened, like any craft it can be mastered but both of these take time to do.
a chapter doesnt need to have sex in it to be good just keep up the good work
Kan stared at her arousal for the longest time before slapping it as hard as she could.
"You're Anthony's," she spat angrily. "You wait for him to touch you, and nobody else." Ok! That ending was funny...creepy as fuck but funny!