by Oldbroad76
"...however unbeknownst the relationship was at the time." Pretty sure you meant 'unknown' there, because as is, it's not the right word at all. Still, an interesting story, about of a soulless harpy, who sort of deserves a little payback after running young men around by their cock and balls for a couple decades.
Thanks for the warning that this is headed into a long, repetitive and ultimately boring harem mode story. Saves a lot of time down the road. I'll just pretend like this was the last installment.
Great story idea. Just a bit too detailed--found myself skipping paragraphs.
Excellent beginning to what should be a great series. Keep building on the anticipation.
I love the first chapter. Creative writing depends on good story telling and DETAILS. I find the story balanced so that it isnt beyond the scope of believability. Having some RL experience with similar experiences, it is refreshing to see a story that does not destroy my ability to accept as possible. Well done. I am looking forward to more. Thank you.
Great start to a new series. Hopefully, Nick will be hunting for many more mature women to fuck and blackmail.
Thanks for writing this story.
Frankly, don't get the criticism. I think its well written with an engaging storyline. And, lastly, the details concerning her reactions are terrific.