All Comments on 'Ch. 02: Visit to the Farm'

Great story please keep writing

Excellent work

You really need to work on dialogue. People just don't talk the way you depict it.

Also I could have done without the fake boobs and "12-inch long dick".

And please learn the diffrence between, lie, lay and laid. You get it wrong every single time!

More please

What an introduction to a good time

Great illustrations. Do the guys EVER kiss or even touch each other? Do they ever touch? Do the girls EVER peg the guys? Why or why not?

Great story great illustrations, shame the guy had to have a 12 inch cock, Average is 5.25 long 4.25 around, 12 inches is way too much even for a fantasy, the implausibly detracts from the excellent Idea, writing and illustrations for me. In case you're wondering I'm 6.75 long and 5.25 around, and a little bigger if I'm really pleased to see you.