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by AllenWoody

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
I was hoping you would add more to this one!

Yay! I’m so glad you chose to add to this story. I’ve been lurking around literotica, hoping for a continuation. Great writing, like the characters and you did a great job with the female POV. Thanks for entertaining us with your stories 🙂

AllenWoodyAllenWoodyabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you Anonymous

I'm glad you liked it! You appear to be one of the few, however, given the story's low ratings (well below my other works).

Other readers: If my story disappointed you in some way, please send story feedback or leave a comment here. I am always looking to improve. Thanks!

The_WatermanThe_Watermanabout 4 years ago
It was ok

I'm happy you are continuing the story, but it felt routine. Nothing new happened. He didn't add to her submissiveness or his domination. Just the same old stuff.

AllenWoodyAllenWoodyabout 4 years agoAuthor
Waterman, thank you.

I always appreciate your feedback.

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