- Incest/Taboo
- Challenge
- Page 6
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Click hereHe didn't know how long he shook and screamed himself but it took him a long time to return to anywhere close to reality.
She collapsed forward and he dropped right beside her. He gathered her to him as they both collected themselves.
"My god." He mumbled.
"Wow." She purred.
Through panting and some petting, they both slowly calmed down.
She snuggled close and he knew. Their attraction and the forbiddenness of it all had rocked them both. She thrilled him and pleased him more than any woman had come close to. He hoped maybe the feeling was the same with her.
And as much as he had trouble admitting it, he had changed. He no longer just wanted her. Wanted to see how he could make her feel. He now loved her. Was in love with her. He wanted her as much as he could possibly have her. He was certain.
And the way she pressed her face tight to his chest, her hand stroking his stomach, he sensed she might feel the same.
But... she was engaged.
And, the world saw them differently.
He spoke intimately. "I knew your waters ran deep. But... I felt it generally. I didn't have any idea you were capable of this."
She laughed sweetly. "Yeah?"
Then she managed to surprise him again.
"Listen. I don't know about out there and what all happens with everything else," she drew a deep breath, "but in here I'm yours. I belong to you."
They kissed passionately.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous2 months agoThis needs more since you did your MC dirty. The "player" is just being used like a human dildo. That's not love. That's just a cougar manipulating the cocky playboy who thinks he can handle her. She kept the safety and stability of her soon-to-be husband with a little excitement on the side to satisfy her taboo kink. A second chapter where he leaves her stewing for someone who actually wants to be with him would do him justice.
Anonymous4 months agoThis feels like only the first half of a story. The engagement needs to be resolved. She shouldn't have accepted in all honesty especially since she's in love with Tom. And he'd be jealous as fuck if she's living with Gary while fucking him. It would feel like a betrayal, which just doesn't really fit in an incest story between those in the relationship. Ultimately I feel like this story started off well, gained traction then went downhill after the proposal.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI would have left the party immediatly and asked for a transfer from my job across the country. He was betrayed.
FoggyKernelover 1 year agoI can only give a 4/5 star rating. The beginning was a little chaotic. Why was Tom banging on the bag, what is bothering him? And what is the vague hint that it was his mother and not his sister who called him. There is very little setup to indicate Tom and his mother had a close relationship, so when it became clear that is who he was fixated upon, it didn't really gel (for me). The dry humping scene was too abrupt. No indication of how it ended? Did she run off? He just get up a walked out? Then suddenly, the meeting with the sex therapist. Which begs the question of why she was seeing one to begin with? There are the hints from the daughter about what his mother was doing after the divorce, but based on Ellen's accounting, she was not sleeping around. Of course this triggers the first coupling between mother and son, which again, I felt you did not close it well? Did she spend the night? Did she leave immediately? You hint at it with his description of sexting between them, but again very vague.
I am, unlike others, not upset over the marriage proposal. That made a lot of sense. She said Gary was very suspicious and it mad sense he would jump quickly. The final sex scene was very good, though it implied that this was the first time she notice he recovered quickly. It would seemed to me that should have happened the first time.
