All Comments on 'Chance Encounter'

The point of the story - just about any story - on this site is to get the characters laid. It is up to the author to get this done - and after a couple of thousand words setting the scene there was the mandatory stroke scene and he was finished. But the party leading up to the parties getting away and getting it on was long, long, long.

As a matter of writing practice: I'm don't think the author gave the Jessica much reason to be so attracted by Matthew. The stroke scene was acceptable mostly because it was much longer and more detailed than is usual, but again: the author really didn't give us much reason why Jessica acted with such abandon when at the start of the story she was made to seem quite reserved.

Holy shit