by techsan
Nice one Techsan, I think you have captured the spirit beautifully....
Cant wait for chapter two (and possibly three) where both couples get together and fuck the living daylights out of each other.... I can just see both of the guys exploring the mouths, pussy's and anus's of both partners... potentially with some double penetration and of course a great deal of pussy sucking... My fav vision though is of one of the guys, giving it everything he has to the ass of one of the women, while she greedily sucks on the other guys cock... all the time though the second woman, is slurping on the clit of the first woman who is having her ass filled....
I would be worried there not some nut case on line check them out first.
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
sorry ... but you lost me at 200 lbs. ...
but good luck with your writing