All Comments on 'Change of Ownership'

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AeneaTAeneaTover 1 year ago

The story was fine, but I don’t think it belongs in the Transgender category, it’s very much a Gay Male story with a single piece of lingerie and some needless sissy talk.

alladinstardukealladinstardukeover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you for your feedback AeneaT. I see what you’re saying. My main goal was to keep this under 7500 words and only one part. This story was hashed out in four drafts. Earlier drafts had that detail in it. It really worked against the story, mostly due to the setting. I focused on just the psychological aspects in a subtly forced feminization and the story popped. Thanks again! ASD

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I write titillating cautionary tales. I found myself near the end of my teenage years in the late nineties. I focus on that period frequently out of nostalgia. I’m an advocate of yes means yes. My stories often portray the grey area of consent. Implied consent that isn’t ...