All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 01'

Dark. Great start to a story with a scary controlling force.

That is good writing and a well written tale.

Great start to what I think will be a good read... moving onto next chapter...

Never got past the first half of the first page.

The whole premise just pisses me off.

Stand up go to the police and she and all chumps go to prison for a long time!!! Idiotic to think a man would go with that slut!!!

Neither character warrants attention; using an accident victim's blood to blackmail someone? Dagmar needs her Lithium.

Don't know if the 'pride cometh' or 'oh what a tangled web' saying or both are at play here? A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.