All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 01'

Don't know if the 'pride cometh' or 'oh what a tangled web' saying or both are at play here? A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Neither character warrants attention; using an accident victim's blood to blackmail someone? Dagmar needs her Lithium.

Stand up go to the police and she and all chumps go to prison for a long time!!! Idiotic to think a man would go with that slut!!!

Never got past the first half of the first page.

The whole premise just pisses me off.

Great start to what I think will be a good read... moving onto next chapter...

That is good writing and a well written tale.

Dark. Great start to a story with a scary controlling force.