All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 03'

Jessica has a long way to go with becoming responsible, and that won't happen while she's so self-centered. Hope Aileen is at least rubbing one out once in a while; sex drives vary, from asexual to intense daily need, and most people hover in range of a few times a week being optimal.

Personally, I think Kris might be good for Adam. Being taught by someone a few years older and more experienced was a fairly common practice in many societies before the Industrial Revolution and often continues to happen in frontier areas.

Spellchecker would be good, and there is a free version of Grammarly that you can install to work with your email. Paste the text to be checked in a blank message, let the add-on software find the mismatched quotes, missing or excessive commas, and whatnot. It's about 90% effective. If you have a reader or editor, do the Grammarly first.

Story is engaging and characters are established. Looking forward to what's next. 5*

I hope we will find out more of what happened upstairs. Will Jess "interrogate" her nephew in the next chapter?

Thank you for your comments and support. Great to hear that you're enjoying the story. We don't comment on what will happen though ;).

We do use Grammarly for our work - so if you find something that's really obvious that we somehow missed or that Grammarly missed, please point this out to us. We're not currently using an editor, even though we're currently looking for someone dependable :).

All the best!

--Jas

Honestly when I read chapter 1 I was a bit skeptical. Chapter 2 was actually really good and got me interested. This chapter is a bit more tame then I would have expected but nonetheless still looking forward to the next chapter.

I wonder if mom ever gets involved, either way I eagerly will be looking out for the next chapter. Can't really say anything bad about this one besides give me more chapters! 5 stars!

WOW - this was a complex, engaging chapter! 5*