All Comments on 'Changes Ch. 05'

Great chapter and really hope you continue as planned. Looking forward to what happens next.

Great chapter. I know you said at the beginning still more writing to do but this will be dissapointing if jess and adam dont endbup together in long term future.

Jess's past is catching up and hopefully adam stands up to be her protector.

Each chapter gets more and more intense - excellent writing! 5*

I hate chapters that have such shitty endings, the negative emotions from the second half wiped out all the pleasure of reading the first half. Not cool to end a chapter like that.

Thanks for your comments, everyone! Even the negative one/s ;).

Needless to say, if you're not a fan of the ups and downs of life, then you'll probably want to avoid this story. It's going to be a bit of a rollercoaster - because that's what's fun for us to write! :)

--Jasmine

I love the progress of the story so far. It's nice to see some not so good moments. It obvious she needed this wake up call and I love the delivery! Keep it up!

A good story after a long seach and after so many days.

Keep going.

Waiting....

Keep checking every day. Like this one. Keep it going :)

chapter 6?

I check everyday for this amazing story i hope you guys aren't giving up on it. Its one of the best of the year so far!

Mom shut the hell up and listen sometimes. I guess in rolls Adam with his dick in his hand. If not now it will be soon. Kris will see to that because she will be riding and sucking Adam. This will make Jess mad and wet too. She will havew to have her some dick too. The big question is if mom will want and get some too? LOL

We're not giving up. We're currently busy with Real life stuff, about 50% done with the next chapter or so :).

Thanks for following us!

When we will see part 6

I made this a favorite a few years back and just reread it, It is so well written a great story and quite believable so please keep at it.

Thanks everyone! Chapter 6 is now submitted - things get both heavier and hotter :).

Really well told - You had me so mad at Martin I wanted to find him myself and kick his ass. LOL! 5*