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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Re-read before posting. There were grammatical errors and spelling errors. You switch from 1st person to 3rd person and then back to 1st person. This story should have been fleshed out more. What was going on between the appointments? How was her relationship with her husband changing?

It was an interesting concept though.

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Retired engineer, retired on the coast. My writing background has been technical writing. The works of writers like saddletramp1956 and kalimaxos inspired me to give it a try. I enjoy comments from published authors, in most cases the comments are helpful. Anonymous comments...