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All Comments on 'Changing Places Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's "lightning" and not "lightening." Other than that, loving the story so far!

thewoozlethewoozleover 1 year ago

Not a lot here yet but has a lot of interesting promise for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You mean lightning. Not "lightening." They're different words. Next time, use an editor.

PandelusionPandelusionover 1 year ago

Cant wait to read more!

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