All Comments on 'Chapter 01: Stopping the Game'

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AardieAardie12 months ago

We need more about the wife. It seems unlikely that someone in her position would be so stupid.

MormonJackMormonJack12 months ago

Looking forward to more! Thank you!

muskyboymuskyboy12 months ago

Why did the wife cheat on him and why would she hook up with such a loser?

InfiniteXaosInfiniteXaos12 months ago

I feel bad for the aunt though. Our guy just let that rape happen, didn't even set up therapy or anything for her?

EvelZombieEvelZombie12 months ago

This story is some off the walls crazy shit. But of a mixed bag, but somewhat enjoyable if I am willing to suspend every aspect of reality I know to be true. I'll give the author 3 stars for the effort.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Not happening!!!

USMC Vietnam 21 Single Going to make career. Cured of it seeing cheating and divorce etc

Firmly believe in citizen soldiers.

No sorrow for MCs who married job and didn't put spouse first and children second!!!!

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Just a slightly weird guy exploring ideas. I am somewhat relationship retarded too.