All Comments on 'Chapter (13) XIII: The Ipet-Mau'

Love this story. Please keep writing it and many others. Thank you for your time and effort

in creating stories for your readers.

5/5

J

Great storyline and thank you for your proofreading skill. Your writing technique is rock solid for a person doing fiction as a hobby. I want more of your stuff. FYI, that’s meant as a compliment not as a prod for you to write faster. You’re doing great. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us.

I am really liking the story but do wish your chapters were longer. About double the length would be best. Also cliff hangers suck but are alright if used sparingly. I do really hope you have the guy grow into his role slowly and not turn him into a wimp.

Was enjoying this series shame its not finished

I'm sorry. I have uploaded the next chapter and it was rejected. I've resubmitted, but I assume it's going to be rejected as well, because it's been a few days. The only message I got was an automated rejection notice. Didn't even give me a reason. So, the next chapter will be up as soon as I can get that sorted. Sorry.