by BlueYonder63
Really enjoyed reading this story. Many thanks.
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Very exciting, though maybe a bit predictible. You could follow up with a Ch2 with Kim saying she needed a job so signened on with an adult store to demonstrate and sell sexy clothing & toys for women or mixed groups.--- etc.
Would it not be more erotic and exciting without the crude terminology? I think so. Subtle, erotic; gentle...no need for the crude expressions. Eroticism gets lost in the crude language.
Hey, give a girl a break, bloody spell check! Proud, he was bloody proud!
my little brain took over while reading and I failed to notice his manhood was 'broad' or what! great hot story... too bad the other anonymous seems to have burned out his little brain.. hahahaha
Really?
I would have thought that he would be more likely to be "proud"!!