by Kay_Evans100
The description and detail in this story is so vivid - blows me away.
Incredibly erotic; beautifully captured exhibitionism. 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Wow where next with this story!!!
Totally hooked.
Seriously hot stuff. I felt as if I was there watching her walking down that catwalk being exhibited
Phew - what next!??
Like the story, though you could have brought the last couple of chapters into 1.
Hate the present tense.
Your own pleasure excites this reader, as does the way you describe this experience - 5/5 xx
Loving the story and how it’s building but for future reference I would collapse those last chapters into 1.
Another sensational hot chapter, so well written that I can feel the heat in my cheeks, and elsewhere, as if I were Kay on the catwalk. I love this 5 star story, thank you for writing it. xx