All Comments on 'Charity Slave Auction Ch. 08 Pt. 02'

Very imaginative story telling to change to different perspective.

The caging and sex scenes are beautifully captured in the writing

When will Kay realize she is not just Sue's lesbian lover but s slave

Will the story continue? please, please

This twist leaves me wanting so much more.

This is the best multi-part story I have ever read on here! Please continue the tale!

Great job on the 2nd prospective!

Keep up the great story! I can’t wait to hear what happens to you next.

I love your descriptions, even though they were a bit slow in the beginning. After Chapter 6 everything was perfect. Great job and keep writing.

Awesome story lots of possibilities.

Definitely one of the best stories I've read on here. Anticipation is high for the rest of Kay's tale. x

but I honestly prefer Reluctance or Consensual stories, there really isn’t any need to make her a victim. That’s a personal thing, I’m not trying to push you to change your story. If it goes too far for me I’ll just drop it.

The only “action” in this scene that seemed off was the different hands touching her, I realise that her senses aren’t fully onboard but I know I can tell the difference between hands. Even more so if its male and female hands touching.

Tess (uk)

An intriguing twist, which I much enjoyed xx

That is an extremely clever twist to show the same plot from another angle and makes the story much darker and intense. Very clever!!! And brilliantly done

My totally minor point is that with Kay’s senses heightened she would have surely known it was different people but that is trivial.

Wow this twist took me by surprise. Love it. ❤ This author is really good a cut above average Literotica stuff.

This was dark, sexy, thrilling and all good things. I enjoyed it immensely and wish I could give more than 5 stars, but I can’t. Thank you Kay xx

oh my god this story just gets HOTTER & HOTTER and then even HOTTER!

This is the best slow-motion trainwreck story I've ever seen. We all know the train will crash, we just don't know how long until it does or what exactly the crash will look like, Well Done!

Oh my how dark is this getting, but she still if falling for it!

oooh didn't expect this. Lovely way to continue the story