All Comments on 'Charlene Ch. 03'

by Nymfoholic

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
two stars

IMO, the first chapter (which I enjoyed) and the third were so different that they read as if from different stories.

The timeline went way too fast in this chapter. Then... there are the fairy godparents that pay for room and board, college, a car, therapy for Charlie AND her Mom, TWO houses and seed money for a business.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I'm in love with your writing

That was so romantic and beautiful.

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