All Comments on 'Charlie Ch. 04'

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BahamaBahamaalmost 11 years ago
Wow

That was good ! Wow , I was right there with them . Can't wait to see what happens next .

jaqi1978jaqi1978almost 11 years ago
Great!

You got me looking for more,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More..

This is so good, more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow!

I love this story! Please don't stop

DarktopakDarktopakalmost 11 years ago
Sticking till the end.

I like your plot and how you've written the story so far. I'm definitely a fan. Can't wait till the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More!!!

Omg wats it with u and cliffhangers lol. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

You should continue this story. I dig the cliffhangers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So no sex - wow really hot I was fingering myself!

The scenes in the gay bar were so hot I couldn't control myself! Wow! However, maybe I read it wrong but early on there seemed to be a mix up between Casey and Lindsey that needs an edit. Jennie Elf.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Still a great read!

Wow, what a plot twist! Now I've got to dive into chapter 5 to see what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This is exciting. Will Charlie be okay? On to the next chapter.

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