All Comments on 'Charlie Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This is exciting. Will Charlie be okay? On to the next chapter.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 7 years ago
Still a great read!

Wow, what a plot twist! Now I've got to dive into chapter 5 to see what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So no sex - wow really hot I was fingering myself!

The scenes in the gay bar were so hot I couldn't control myself! Wow! However, maybe I read it wrong but early on there seemed to be a mix up between Casey and Lindsey that needs an edit. Jennie Elf.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

You should continue this story. I dig the cliffhangers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More!!!

Omg wats it with u and cliffhangers lol. Please write more!

DarktopakDarktopakalmost 11 years ago
Sticking till the end.

I like your plot and how you've written the story so far. I'm definitely a fan. Can't wait till the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow!

I love this story! Please don't stop

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More..

This is so good, more please!!!

jaqi1978jaqi1978almost 11 years ago
Great!

You got me looking for more,

BahamaBahamaalmost 11 years ago
Wow

That was good ! Wow , I was right there with them . Can't wait to see what happens next .

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