All Comments on 'Charlotte & The Pirate Ch. 01'

by mcfbridge

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SlutSalomeSlutSalomeover 19 years ago
Let there be more!

I look forward to reading more of this story, love a corset ripping pirate story!

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 19 years ago
Grrreat ...

Now I'm drawn into a story that's at least 10 parts?

I love pirates and hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter.

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
I only just....

ran across this story in a search of something "new" to read and very glad so far. Looking forward to reading on...respectfully a new fan gained in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Very good

Just one thing: If she is a mademoiselle as opposed to a madame (a married woman) it should be Mlle ... not Mme. Really good apart from that!

Horseman68Horseman68almost 5 years ago
Very Promising.

A very well written beginning to what promises to be a very good story. Reading on.

yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 4 years ago

A very good beginning mcfbridge. And as Black Tulip said below; Now I'm hooked on a 10 part story. But I think it'll be worth it. I'm not an expert on the period, but to me the details were believable and painted a clear picture of what was happening in this intro chapter. The narrative has a nice flow and very readable. Just so you know; I either vote a 5 or no vote at all — I voted on this one.

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