by mcfbridge
I look forward to reading more of this story, love a corset ripping pirate story!
Now I'm drawn into a story that's at least 10 parts?
I love pirates and hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter.
ran across this story in a search of something "new" to read and very glad so far. Looking forward to reading on...respectfully a new fan gained in Texas
Just one thing: If she is a mademoiselle as opposed to a madame (a married woman) it should be Mlle ... not Mme. Really good apart from that!
A very well written beginning to what promises to be a very good story. Reading on.
A very good beginning mcfbridge. And as Black Tulip said below; Now I'm hooked on a 10 part story. But I think it'll be worth it. I'm not an expert on the period, but to me the details were believable and painted a clear picture of what was happening in this intro chapter. The narrative has a nice flow and very readable. Just so you know; I either vote a 5 or no vote at all — I voted on this one.