All Comments on 'Charlotte & The Pirate Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Dear god

Dear god, that had me reading while biting my lip. You have me scared now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhh....

man...this is getting interesting...excellent'

Horseman68Horseman68almost 5 years ago
Hooked.

Great story. Reading on to see what awaits the lady and her love.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great plot surprise ...

... came just at the right time ... was pondering to drop out because the plot became too predictable ... Nicely prepared trap for the unsuspecting reader ;-)

yukonnightsyukonnightsabout 4 years ago

Oh my! You snuck up on us with a clever plot twist. Well executed. (I have the faintest inkling that I have read this story sometime in the past — but can't be sure.) Anyway, highest rating on this part.

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