by mcfbridge
Dear god, that had me reading while biting my lip. You have me scared now.
Great story. Reading on to see what awaits the lady and her love.
... came just at the right time ... was pondering to drop out because the plot became too predictable ... Nicely prepared trap for the unsuspecting reader ;-)
Oh my! You snuck up on us with a clever plot twist. Well executed. (I have the faintest inkling that I have read this story sometime in the past — but can't be sure.) Anyway, highest rating on this part.