All Comments on 'Charlotte & The Pirate Ch. 05'

Please, don't tell me he was sent by her treacherous husband!

That makes for a nasty twist. But you sure know how to keep your public interested. LOL

things have to get better for this girl *sigh*...you have a very twisted but brilliant way of taking a story one way leading a reader only to plant "other" thoughts within their heads....i love it and i can usually figure out a plot way before the story is over...this one is not so easy. Truly wonderful. respectfully

This has turned into a great little story. Really a good read. Bravos