All Comments on 'Charlotte's Day'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
So Hot

Nothing hotter than Girl/Girl sex, but five all going at it in the same room Wow!

However Jessica honey your ending sucked, leaving us hanging, you better have another chapter in the works.

Your writing was great as was your story and for a first timer yet, expecting good things from you so keep on writing.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 9 years ago
P.S.

It would be nice to see how Hot Hot Jessica is.

hot_jessicahot_jessicaover 9 years agoAuthor
Part 2 on the way

Part 2 is on the way. Probably should have done them as one piece. Thanks for feedback so far

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