by BiteMe_Please
You need an editor to look at this. I'm afraid I didn't enjoy reading it as I didn't find the characters at all likeable.
I like the conflict you are creating! It's not often (ie never) that the female is informed - this should be interesting. Thank you! DW
characters, seem interesting, premise, very different, what happens from here, i see several paths, to which is taken, all seem good, hope to see more soon.