All Comments on 'Chasing Charlie'

It's good because you gave a good start to the story and gave Charlie a background,then he has what seems a one night stand it the back of the store?I was expecting romance...........

Ignore the critical ones. Lol. I thought it was great. I was doubtful that a one night stand at an adult bookstore wouldn't leave him with regrets for his first time, but Gage was sweet and thoughtful by making sure his advances were okay. How much romance did they expect when it wasn't exactly a date and he was leaving in a few days. I'm hopeful for more if he's able to return in a reasonable amount of time. Will he still be in the Navy after and be moving often? The title and promise of a part 2 made me feel better bc they seemed to have some chemistry that could lead to more than just sex in the ABS. Will Gage contact him while he's in San Diego since he has his cell? That'd be cool since I don't think a bunch of anon sex would be Charlie's way of finding someone for something more permanent. It was sweet that he took Bear too.😃

Welcome back old friend. This is a wonderful emotional beginning for a hot story.

I loved it very much, I got so,horny reading it and wanting to be him getting that big curved cock up my ass. I'm a married bi male that, in just the last few years, I tried my first cock in my ass and I loved it. I now know that, I'm a bottom.

The only thing that ever happened to me at the Hooters on Military HWY was food poisoning.

So Charlie was in his 30's before his 1st gay encounter! Wow! I was 32 when I finally ACCEPTED myself as gay, but had had quite a few gay encounters during the 16 or so years before then. I cannot help but wonder what Ginny's reaction will be when he tells her (if he does tell her).

I tend to like stories best when they have a decent plot along with some hot scenes. That's why I gave this story 5 stars. Will be watching for the next segment.

Phenomenal start. Can't wait for more!

Great story. Look forward to following chapters. Bait a Hook and Plotting a Course are 2 of the best stories I ever read on this site. Keep it up.

Every week I come to check to see if this really great writer I found has graced Lit with a wonderful piece to soak in and enjoy. I have so loved the care and perspective you share in your stories. Charlie has me truly intrigued. Please let his story be shared. I won't stop checking. I think you're worth it. =)

I really want to see how Charlie developes. Please return.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Finally I found a story with just enough emotional staff to make it readable, but not enough to turn into a chick romance novel!

And the confusion of an older first timer is just spot on! Loved it!

Now, should I find a Hooters or any bar would do? ;)

Alex

Will part be coming soon????????

Just the right amount of sex

That was outstounding (that's a cross between outstanding and astounding)!

I know the Hooters on Military Highway at JANAF but where is that damn book store...hehehe?