All Comments on 'Chasing Eden Ch. 14 - Final'

Thanks for the wonderful story, it is my favourite of yours. I love you erotic stories but I feel the characters in this developed more depth and the narrative was more complex.

I hope to read more in this style from you soon.

Would really love to read more about Peter and Irene. They seemed like such a lovely couple!

This was a lovely thriller, something I wasn't expecting on Literotica! Bravo to you, and for sure a five Star story

Thank you so much for this. It was incredible. My heart goes out to Peter and his lovely wife.

I loved this story. Even without the sex. I started reading your work with Jane. I loved the hint at the end about some friends joining her. This lets us speculate about who it might be, hopefully Jane and Veronica. Love triads are tricky, but maybe there is one in our future.

The friends that are coming are Leah and Fang. Jane and Veronica are moving to Florida lol :)

Jane and Veronica move to Florida? Do you have another story planned for those two?

Not really. Maybe I can do a short story for them.

Great job...you do mystery/puzzle very well. Keep it up and thank you for the story!

Even though this story was often difficult to continue, I pursued it to the end. One of the reasons I enjoy your more common erotic stories is just that they are generally pleasant to read. I do enjoy some mysteries and thrillers but I can't manage a steady diet of them.

My other favorite genre, if you can call it that, is books/stories based around bookstores and libraries - not so much even the gentle mysteries as just the enjoyment of books and fellow readers. I'd kind of like to see a series that starts out as a casual meeting in a bookstore.