All Comments on 'Chateau Moi'

Very well done. I appreciate the humor and use of words...

"...hormones, pheromones and any other moans..." .

good start

Very good start off, with plenty of scope for future development. Looking forward to the chapters to follow 👍🏻

Really enjoyable start, a nice build up to what promises to be an excellent storyline. Well done!

More, please.

Great writing and opening chapter.

Yes, definitely. More, please.

Delightful premise.

Nicely told.

Would have liked more in the way of hads-on foreplay -- both ways.

Nevertheess, five stars.

Shame on you for failure to warn that this is to be a serialized story. Good story though. 3* instead of 5* because of the deception.

Fantastic start! More please.

More ! And soon !

Quite lovely! I'm looking forward to further chapters.

Good start but like others was surprised it was only chapter 1 when I got to the end. Still, it got very hot at the end with a delicious blowjob.

Will be interesting to see how you deal with this once the daughter arrives!