All Comments on 'Châtelet'

Excellent! I look forward to the next ride.

Loved it. The premise is totally relatable; know from personal experience!

Would love some more build-up, the state of mind before the ride, the unexpected caress that sets the mind wandering, the decisions that one has to grapple with in a split second etc.

Most of the fun in such a scenario is between the ears.

Looking forward eagerly for more.

I live part of the year in Paris and I wish something like this would happen to me! Keep writing!

I want to get this train home from work!

Beautifully written, perfectly paced, VERY hot. Nice work :o)

Please continue to write more

I have read two of your stories and they are very well written

excellent. you have to do all the Paris Metro stops, describes the trains, the seats, the time of day.

... just like the inside of that Metro car! I agree with the other praise and hope we'll see more of these tales from the City of Light.

This might be my favorite story on this website! Please write more stories about Paris, especially from the woman's point of view. I liked Ecole Militaire as well.

Wow!!! Sound too good to be true!

Love the silent sex in public. More please!

i love stories that end with a good hot creampie