by Yossarian67
I really enjoy your writing style. This is a hot story, written in a realistic and entertaining way. Thanks for sharing it. Please write more often!
I had something similar happen to me but it was for a co-worker's going away party. The girl was someone that I used to work with but she lived near me. This brought back some awesome memories!!
I liked your style, sexy and funny. The ending was nice. Good characters, well perhaps the hottie was a bit "thin" if you know what I mean. Anyway, if I read 50 stories in this genre,this ranks surely in the top 5.
I really loved this story. This is by far the best I've read in recent months. I hope this storyline continues in a similar fashion.
...so much for it NOT turning out to just be his wife fulfilling a fantasy. When she showed up at the car I was pretty sure that's where it was heading. Pleasantly surprised to see it wasn't.
The "I cheated but (plot twist) my wife tricked me into it...and was happy." What wife would be happy proving her husband would cheat? THAT story is overdone and hard to swallow.
This story was awesome, well written, and believable. All through the hook up I expected the girl to be like "Okay Mr P, you still don't remember me?" And her be like, his wife's cousin or a kid he knew growing up. You kept it simple, and I really liked it.
I had hoped you tied in the girl with the wedding or one of your co-workers. Panties in the car was a nice touch.
I liked it and was reminded of my first time straying. I brought home the panties and told her the truth. She said she didn't believe me. She insisted I wasn't attractive enough for that to happen. She claimed that the panties must have been snagged from one of my friends conquests or something. I tried to bet her oral that I wasn't joking. It wasn't until I got her to go down on me and taste me that she suddenly realized I was not kidding. After she slurped me up she rode me ragged for weeks. It was then that I learned that my wife prefers me to occasionally cheat on her. That really opened up our marriage