All Comments on 'Cheating Ch. 01'

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saw_man1saw_man1almost 19 years ago
Devious

Giving back one tape for every task accomplished is very clever. It gives him the tangible reward that will ensure his compliance and if there is one chapter for each tape, it gives us a nice long story to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And when he decides to come after you?

What then? Blackmail is a slippery slope. He records you once, you're going to jail. He gets frustrated and goes to your house for what he wants and you end up dead. Is it worth it? This whole, sad story is just to implausible. Even for fiction.

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