by Antryg_Windrose
or an introduction, not a story. so i can't score it until the chaos reigns.
when do the hubbys catch the bitches and start to throw them out now that would be a story and lets hear about revenge on the gay boys
They (he) can’t help but whine and cry over any story where the wife doesn’t get killed or sent to skid row. It’s obvious he hated seeing a woman have fun on the story because he only has fun like that jerking his tiny peepee to the gay stories on this site. Now he will post tons of anonymous posts agreeing with himself and declaring how many 1*’s he will vote. I wonder if every porn site has their own power troll like we do? Maybe we should have a contest with the other sites to see whose little bitch is the biggest baby?
The only troll I see here is you, with your whacky conspiracy theories.
You must be a Trump supporter!
i don't care if it's not a btb, but i'd prefer it lean that way.
it seems very neutral currently, which i can respect.
i don't mind hot cheating scenes either. but that fantasy where all husbands are okay with it, or happier for it is just too hard to believe. or that really crazy fantasy where all cheaters and seducers are not only very very good looking and rich, but ....smart? really? and to top that off the spouses that usually earn more are clueless. that particular fantasy is more magical than harry potter to me.
but if you are going that route, let the rest of us know in a brief description or something. that'd be super cool of you.
I gave this story a 3***, but thanks for including me in with voters I know give fair results cuck or not. Sissy boy whining bitch may cost this author points with his crying like a pathetic wimp.
Very Life Like" WHAT".....Sheesh! walking into a bar with a gun with the sole purpose of getting that cheating Slut!....Makes You think twice before cheating! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!......I ENJOYED THIS STORY .........See Ya!
In a cheating story will made it fresh and Avant Garde. All it did was give it the rancid taste of chicken Hawks sexing prosti-twinks in public Park restrooms
Nutf said
. . . how do the club members know that their husbands aren’t out banging their coworkers?
Usually the LW stories feature husbands who’ve never screwed around, but that isn’t real life. Of course, wives who screw around with enough different guys that they need week.y STD screenings aren’t all that frequent in the real world.
This story is frustrating because the writing was almost good. Yes the concept is juvenile, and the characters are cartoonish, but the basic story structure shows that the writer has some knowledge on how to put together a story.
The writer created an excellent character with the bartender. This was the most real person in the story. I really saw this guy in my head. Then we get to the "Cheating Cunts Club".
Sigh.
If this were a name that jilted husband's gave this club, then fine. But that fact that these women refer to themselves as cheating cunts is beyond stupid.
Secondly, these women sound like a bunch of high school boys (ninth graders) in a locker room trying to prove how cool they are and how much sex they get, when in all actuality they're virgins. All these women needed to do was talk about how much pubic and chest hair they have to complete the picture. Maybe even compare dick sizes and joke about banging each other's moms.
Examples? Well, sure.
"...except for my little sloppy pussy, ha ha. He and his fuck-buddies don't seem to mind sticking their long queer dicks into my digestive system, one end or the other. Just so I don't kiss their mouths unless we're sharing down there, it's all okay."
Sticking their queer dicks into my digestive system? Really? Who says that?
"And if you're only giving away your pie-hole and your asshole, not your cunny hole, then you don't really qualify for the Cheating Cunts Club, now do you?"
Pie hole? Cunny hole? What woman has ever described her vagina as a cunny hole? Name one.
Not to mention the one woman who feels the need to have weekly testing done, but doesn't feel the need to wear a condom. The absurdity of that is just...well, absurd.
I don't want to bash this author, but the clash of the really good characterization of the bartender mixed with the horrible characterization of the women was too much. When this writer grows up, he will be pretty decent.
"I love the smell of despair in the morning. So brisk." - Maybe I'm misunderstanding this, but it sounds like you're enjoying the reaction to your trolling.