All Comments on 'Cheating Hearts Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
well now

isn't he a nasty, domineering butthole. but then again the sisters already knew that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I like this story, but I wish the chapters were longer.

JezellenJezellenover 13 years ago
more please

let the fight begin and hope that the truth (when it comes out) of his past and the trust i hope he will eventually learn from talking about it will set luke free to love again.

Love4wordsLove4wordsover 13 years ago
Good story but

In my opinion this is only gonna get more dramatic and stupid but that's just me cause I was thinking about stop reading this because I didn't like the idea of her sleeping with her sisters big ex. Now I officially will stop becuase from this point on I can see the story unfold and the lil sis is already emotionally attached so the only interesting part is gonna be the betrayal.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
5 stars

I hope jasmine not give up easy to his demand...although short but it's good chapter.thanks.keep good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WTH!

Luke is a *ick..but aside from that, i thought there was gonna be more :( cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Looking forward to the continuation.

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
hmmm

before everybody puts the stake in his head, the little line about his father makes me wonder, what happened, and it involves both parents, to make him so , i will not say cold or cruel because i think he is not, made him so closed to emotion

darkfaerdarkfaerover 13 years ago
WHOA!!!

I am speechless and I want more... Luke is something special and Jasmine what are you going to do when the man come after you!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Mmm

A man, a REAL MAN I WHAT HE IS!!!

SashasworldSashasworldalmost 13 years ago
hmmmm

this makes me wanna get to know Luke & why is he so closed & calm, cool, & collected about everything?

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
I'm curious about Luke tooooooo

That man is carrying a world of hurt. I feel more for him

than Jasmine at the moment. All he seems to know is control and power trips....so sad.

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