All Comments on 'Cheating MILF Gets Punished'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

too fast, you should have developed the story a little better..

PufnaPufna5 months agoAuthor

Thank you for the feedback :D

SabatakiSabataki5 months ago

Not a bad start. Like others said, bit more character development would help develop more interest. Story has tons of potential.

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