All Comments on 'Cheating Wife Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Slow. Poor editing/sentence structure. Dialogue would improve the story significantly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Author does not know how to write...writes like a third grader.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Pretty pathetic stuff. What a waste

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