All Comments on 'Checking on the Neighbors Pt. 03'

Anxiously awaiting part 4

Really looking forward to the rest of this great story

Well done and incredibly hot sex between Mandy and Matt! I look forward to your next installment.

Theakston

Did not see that change in story coming. Can't wait to see what happens in Part 4. Find out how Liz and the twins are doing.

Loved it. Can't wait to see how you tie it all back together. I think a lawyers or team company Halloween party? All dressed up and let the party begin. New surprises. New partners. New levels of acceptance.

Excellent writing. Love the story, love the twist. Anticipating chapter 4. Great job

Very good. I like that you re saying what she looks like. You should do that to the twins mother as well. Maybe Lucy Devalle? Also i d like to read some cuckolding . Peeping scene on the beach was awesome

Looking forward to part 4

please continue the next chapter

Please do not make us wait long

Liz needs to pay.

Don’t wait too long for ch4! Hot!

Please don't make us wait long

Please continue the story. I love it. Very sexually arousing and can't wait to the climax of it. It makes my dick get hard.

Could you please tell us when you will post the next chapter

Roger is out of town and Mandy uses another personal day to stay home. She texted Liz to come over the day before. Liz dresses in a very conservative dress. Mandy makes coffee but for herself only to intimidate Liz. She opens the phone and shows Liz evidence of her debauchery with her sons on the pool and Liz is shocked scared and on fear of losing Matt.

Like a dominant, Mandy slaps Liz on the face several times and orders her to strip nude, affixed a leash on her neck and pulls her crawling on the carpet before grabbing a conveniently placed fly swatter to use on her reddening ass as she makes tearfully crafted apologies that are so fake to Mandy that she pulls hard on her leash dragging Liquor the stairs to their bedroom where she has a surprise for her.

Roger is waiting nude for Liz. Mandy shows him the pictures and video and crying Liz is told to lie on his lap for a royally discipline spanking before she.is told to suck his cock hard and ride on Rogers massive cock. Then she makes amends to Mandy by licking her pussy while getting criticized for her techniques.

Mandy is told to make dinner for the family. Including the two boys, wearing conservative dress sans bra and panties with sleeves cut off by Mandy. She is told to kneel and.offer tearful apologies to each of the boys.

Mandy makes Liz clean their house every day wearing a French Maid 's tight clothes, cooking dinner and helping the boys with homework.

Great series

Your story-lines are good but Part 3 was something many writers do....the other spouses get together. I was surprised as your stories are not predictable.

When you will post the next chapter?

i wanna get those boys fuck my ass every day...

When is the next chapter?

I cannot believe you haven’t written Part IV yet. Please. Your readers are waiting.

when you will post the next chapter?

Please don't make us wait long

We are waiting, when are you going to post the new chapter?

When you will post the next chapter?

It has been long since last update, where are man?

Don’t make us hanged!!

The stories is awsome please continue part 4 please!

I am surprised that you take one of the best written stories I have read on literotica and make some armchair bullshit criticism about it pertaining to the cliché ending. You say the twist was predictable and lazy? Maybe instead it’s just honest and truthful. When two people have their worlds ripped out from underneath them, they often find solace in each other. I love the story and how Liz was unable to resist the sexual magnetism of the twins even while she knew it was wrong. That internal conflict makes for some seriously hot fiction.

A great surprise to this series. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Mandy will use LIz as a submissive woman who will lick her black mistress's pussy and ass in front of Roger whose cock will get harder for Liz to get on top of it and ride him hard.

Mandy will seduce Liz's husband to dump LIz and have Mandy as his girlfriend. As Mistress Mandy, she will put LIz hard at work licking the cocks of their two black studs of sons and her well endowed husband Roger. Liz will be the bearer of black sons and daughters who will treat her as a person much lower than a French Maid.

What happened to part 4?

This is really great a writer that finally found a white man that satisfied the BBC football star's wife better than the he could! I hope some how they all get back on track mainly the 4 that started this wreak. Liz and Matt get back together through theropy and start a family.

You have proven to be a master story teller. Both with Liz and the boys as well as Mandy and Mark. Hope to read more from you.

When can we expect part 4? I hope Liz gets her just desserts in the finale.

this was sexy as hell I need more

This story is so damn good. Why did you stopped writing this... Plz continue.

So fking hot. One of my favorit fantasies, my wife with big black cock lovers. They need double fuck her and Matt see and mandy..

one use of "course" about chap 2 or so, should be "coarse" (as in sandpaper).

I loved this story. Plz continue with chapter 4 and more. Perfectly written to envoke feeling that this is a true story. So believable.

I was hoping it would go the other way.. That Mandy would get fucked by her sons & join Liz with fucking her sons. Also, have her sons go fuck her Husband's Asian Girlfriend too & bring her into their circle.. Then have the twins pregnant Mandy, Liz & the Asian chick.. But this was just as good.. Could have Mandy & Matt end up together.. Liz can have the twins while Mandy's Husband has his Asian girlfriend... PLus we know that Liz likes her ass played with, so she definitely needs to get DP with a cock in her pussy & her ass at the same time..

Enjoyed this story very much! Of course, disappointed about not finding out what happens in the missing chapter 4. Thank you for sharing your story anyway!!

loved the story and want to continue! there are more stories yet to write about Matt and Mandy. please follow up with more

Matt & Mandy!

Where's part 4? (

Ok. You concluded Chapter 3, “ Continued in Checking out the Neighbors Chapter 4.” Well? 7 years is a long time to wait for Chapter 4. Possibly, the hottest erotic story I have ever read.