All Comments on 'Chelly's Story'

Jusus,this is just pathatic shit!

I gave you a 4 with hopes that you will continue this story with another meeting with Jimmy - how else is he going to get paid? Also how she handles the situation with her husband. Plus her future as a bbc slut, and perhaps cuckolding her husband, or becoming a cheating wife.

Your off to a good start keep writing.

That was one hot story. I hope your friend Michelle got off reading it. It is a shame that the rest of the "seminar" did not follow in additional chapters.

Loved your style. Jimmy on the bed...clever. His approach to her " dungeon" was treated masterfully.

I think another chapter is in order, but not with Jimmy. She could become aggressive for her wants and needs as she goes back to black.

Thanks Don

Typical BBC-BS. BTW a stilleto is a slender blade, not really what you intended in your quest to use a new descriptive phrase for BBC. Too bad the story was so ridiculous.

Thanks for this quick erotic story. I is very good but I wish it had 10 chapters!

Thanks again.

Yes another chapter but don't turn her into a blackman slut. Just a little but no domination shite. MY e the husband finds our and follows her or films her and then he confronts her.