All Comments on 'Chelsea'

Of course this Is how this ends. (Sigh)

Very hot! Please turn this into a series!

Aw, I wanna see a series this is so hot, I love couples shemale stories. But if this is where it ends what you gave was great too

Easily the best thing this sites produced in a good while. Please continue these role reversal, cock growth themes. Girls becoming horny and dominant when they somehow grow one are some of the best stories

The story of this happening, her dick slowly growing until I can only be a bottom, is one story. It followed this very specific theme. Obviously where I left it heading is that she is getting more confident, more dominant, and things are getting kinkier. A second chapter would be more in the bdsm type direction, which is great and all, but it would be a very different story I think. So for that reason, I struggle to imagine where this would go that wouldn't be narrowing the topic and becoming something else entirely. Open to ideas and feedback, though right now I am considering letting it loose and doing a very kinky epilogue exploring those ideas for those who are interested and leaving the story as an otherwise standalone story for those who don't. Again, open to feedback but this is the direction I'm presently leaning.

You have such an incredible talent and premise here: a suggestion (if you’re looking for ideas) is to incorporate how she is evolving as a dominant woman and with her strength, how the rest of her body evolves as well.

For feedback, this story could have benefited from measurements of any type, be it saying how many inches her penis had grown to (the story explicitly mentions a ruler), or drawing comparisons like the so often used fruit comparisons (as big as plums or whatever).

OK! So you have the girlfriend eventually getting a bigger cock than her boyfriend so he is the one on the receiving end of their love making, why don't you make it that every time they make love and she blows a load into him that his cock gets smaller and smaller until it turns into a vagina.

This is my favorite story I’ve ever read on here! It’s excellently written! I hope you do more of similar themes!

FiveDots I think "Chelsea" stands alone as a story. You might explore other engagements and lives for the characters with other partners, basically new stories.

My first time on the receiving end was not a shemale but my wife with a strapon. I'd been after her for anal for months and she finally agreed if I'd let her take me as well. She fucked me on a Friday night and I did her 24 hours later. Frankly I was disappointed but she wasn't and every Friday night for the next 6 months I took her cock. As I became "her woman" she became more demanding and I was penetrating her less and less As the dildos increased in size I felt smaller and she felt even bigger than she was, and eventually our sex play turned to a roles shift. It's 4 years later and she's truly and in every way the man of the house.

Idk why but most these futa ones where men are compared to be pathetic really just triggers me and messes with my head

could you please make a sequel?

Best shit I've ever read on this site, especially for something this short! Thank you!!

I've been chewing on an epilogue for this story for quite some time, keep an eye out!

The epilogue is written and in the editing stage. Check back soon!

It's been a long time since I've been there excited over a story! I love it! Especially a fan of how Chelsea's body is described. :) Very fun.9

Disappointing