All Comments on 'Chemical Concocktion Ch. 01'

Who wouldn't want someone to fall in complete adoration? Sounds good to me.

Hope we don't have to wait too long for the next chapter

Joan V @ The Jersey Shore

The next three chapters are awaiting approval :)

There were a few typos but not enough to distract from the story. Loved it, really interested to see where this leads. I have a few stories of my own on the site. If you would like to correspond, I wouldn't mind hearing some of your thoughts.

Damn, I'd buy some of that stuff, it sure as hell works better that booze.Hope to see more soon.....Rich

Your characters seem so realistic with their actions. Very well done.

thanks for the story-- if you happen to be a tall, handsome, athletically gifted, highly intelligent, rich kid, why the hell do you need a mind control/ fantasy device.

I really like where this is going.

Wish I could find a concocktion like that in real life. If anyone needs an assistant to practice on, I'm here. Might be more interesting for a male.

Insulting those who read your work and might use it for escapism is not a good idea, and it is very rude.