All Comments on 'Chemistry Girl - Origins'

by happyboy1980

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pocketrocket 9 months ago

Much too short. This is just a prelude, not even a full chapter.

Each installment in this category ought be at least twice as long and preferably four or five times as much.

Anonymous8 months ago

Interesting concept, poorly written. You need an editor to fix the glaring errors.

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