All Comments on 'Chemistry Pt. 01'

...exactly the way I like'm ... gotta luv them Persian bois

Great start and interesting characters. Eager to read the next chapters and see what happens - and what really happened in his memory/flashback with Jamie. Love Amir’s hit and hairy body...

This is thoughtful, nuanced, beautiful writing. Thank you!

Great start! Love your physical descriptions and Amir's arousal/jerking off. Looking forward to reading Pt. 02!

Good start.

Enjoyed the flashback and look forward to a relationship developing between Amir & Jamie. Has great potential.

Too much BullShit about the girlfriend !!!

I'm not mad at Anonymous who is mad about the girlfriend. But Anonymous you miss the point. Which one feels right? Which one feels better?

Great start. Amir is a guy just figuring himself out. He's just starting to do things for himself and not just because he thinks that's what other people expect of him. Nothing shakes the foundation of your soul like your first real love. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.