All Comments on 'Cherry Blossom Girl Ch. 04'

by August_Bouvier

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Born2ReignBorn2Reignalmost 15 years ago
Uh...3 words!

Awesome, Awesome and oh yeahhh AWESOME! Loved it keep up the good work!

angel_hunniangel_hunnialmost 15 years ago
loved it!

Such a great chapter! Cant wait for more, don't keep us waiting long, please! Loving Noah and Sascha together! Hope they rub it in Alex and Isabelle's face!

divinedididivinedidialmost 15 years ago
I almost don't mind that you take a while...

with your submissions because it is so completely worth it when you post!

That was fabby fab fab.

Thank you v v v much

jennaheartjennaheartalmost 15 years ago
so great

Oh wow! how hot!

Cant wait for the next.

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 15 years ago
Unbelieveable!

I just love it. Thank you for writing.

evanslilyevanslilyalmost 15 years ago
Loving it!

<br>Maybe I should start writing in lilac ink? Might actually get some writing of my own done that way! Hmmm... :-)</br>

<br>Fantastic as usual, hun. Loved the revamped ending too--you nailed it. So...</br>

<br>They're falling for each other, even though neither of them planned anything of the sort--and you've set the scene for it all to get really, <i>really</i> complicated.</br>

<br>Can't wait to find out what happens next! Get to it, girl!</br>

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wonderful, Sexy, Hawt and sad too

Thanks for a great read. Finally they both were on the same page. Can't wait to read more and especially what happens at the wedding when she sees Alex again. I can understand that Isabel wants to protect her brother but she doesn't seem to realize how messed up he is. What he put Sacha through was wrong but the fact that she kept trying wasn't good either. I am glad that she is trying to move on and hopefully she will be able to with her sexy neighbor. Damn where can I get one like him...he trained himself to be a selfless lover. I really like that about him. I also want to know more about what happened with his mother and it seems that she was in an abusive relationship. Nate aunt sounds like she was a great parent to Nate and his brother. Does he have more siblings? Does Sacha have siblings? Where are her parents now?

Thanks for a great read.

soularsoularalmost 15 years ago
Aah, what a great chapter!!

So glad you're back, b/c I truly missed this story. They are so hot together and you paint this story so realistically. Keep up the extraordinary work!__Soular

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonalmost 15 years ago
My oh my...

That was just gorgeous! Three pages of hot sex, raw emotion and sweet affection! Your best chapter yet! I just love Noah and Sascha, they are so human and relatable. And Noah is smokin', damn if I don't want to find a man just like him!! Sooo looking forward to the next one, the depth of character and story is breath taking! Hope to be reading more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
A treat to read

As much as I'm happy for Sascha I envy her right now. LOL. I love how Noah's gentle with her and dominant to. They are so sexy together and I can't wait to see what happens when they really let loose on each other. I hope we'll find out more about Noah's past and what happened with his family. I kind of understand where Isabel is coming from wanting her brother to be happy and in her own way she's also looking out for Sascha but dang did she have to be such a b**** about it? Are you going to do a spin off with Liya and the boss? Btw I like the playlist. Looking forward to reading more soon! Keep on writing. Callie

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
UH OH

what is our man thinking, hmmmmmm??

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
*sigh*

I really wish you'd update this phenomenal story of yours. It's been months! And I'm practically gnawing off my nails, wondering what's to become of this story and of these two characters. You have a genuine gift and to say that it is a treat to allow us fans to read morsels of that gift is truly a privilege. So, PLEASE! Get that fabulous muse back and share! xo-J.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful!

Now hurry up and post the next chapter! We're all dying here!!!

cpm09cpm09about 14 years ago
Love it!

I had to read again...love the characters. Noah and Sascha, perfect for each other!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonabout 14 years ago
Excellent

I shall be expecting an update soon. If the fireworks are like this now, I can only imagine how good they're going to be when Alex, Sacha and Noah's worlds all collide! Cannot wait for the next part to an already brilliant and well crafted story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I've just discovered ...

the wonder that is August Bouvier. Both "Kismet or Happenstance" and "Cherry Blossom Girl" are indescribable stories. Your male leads are simply to die for and the females are ... well ... seem so human and real. Vulnerable yet with a strength of character at the same time. I shake my head in awe at your talent. On that note, I hope to read more of Noah and Sashca and I'm hoping you will update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE!

Still waiting anxiously for your new chapters... It's been too long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
So... You Must Have Said, "Fuck this Story"

Really? It's been about a year...What gives?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Are you still there?

Are you going to finish this story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

please finish this story. im hooked. i love sascha and noah. alex never deserved her. love will be better the second time around for sascha. isabel needs to be slapped. righteous twit.

moonbaby10moonbaby10almost 14 years ago

Please hurry and finish this story, I love the chemistry

Her friends make me wat to slap her, ugh I hate wen people try to get all righteous and crap. SIT DOWN LMAO

marexotic18marexotic18almost 14 years ago
where did you go?

This is one of my favorite stories and I keep coming back to check if you've updated but you haven't! Please do!!!

I really was surprised by her friend, Isabel, what a crappy friend. I hope she apologizes!

Really hope there is more soooon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Are you still there?

Love your stories, wondering if you're ever going to finish this one....

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 13 years ago
Loed

This story series and will check for updates or sequels to it. Keep going../.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Saw your update in August and got excited...

Sad to see that it's been well over 1 month and nothing new yet. :(

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

Great story. Please update soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

brilliant.

please finish this erotic story soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yummyyy I need a Noah!

This story has a very different vibe that k&h. Dare I say it but it's even better it appeals to me more And I find these characters more relateble. It's a bit darke r moodier in a good way. This is probably my tenth time reading it still hasn't lost it's magic. I hope you do find time to continue it's worth it believe me. Hope all is well and may the new year bring some inspiration<3

-mk

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
Sexy delicious is he!!!!

Ok....let's be clear here. That was one hell of a cliffhanger to leave us with to start.

He didn't get it. From the moment he determined she wasn't a fuck buddy; it should have been crystal clear in his heart what the hell it was all about. She was wounded and knew it. He is wounded and has yet to confront his demons. He uses his penis as a sword. Taking women roughly like he ususally did was his way of keeping them a "swords length" away from his soul.

This man loves the powerful feelings sexual contact gives him, but an event in his past has made him detach. The bio-emotional imperative in a man unimpeded makes for a strong connection to a woman. Orgasm is signature energy on multiple levels and when it is right for a man; she is the ONE. He's probably freaking because on a soul level, this is the chick.

Can't wait to see where HE goes with this.

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 12 years ago
wow!!! what is next???

August, this is great!! i know you are the editor of Soular and you are doing great. thanks for that.

BUT please continue with this story. this is too good to just end here. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please

Yes, we need more. I need to know what happens with these two people. I don't remember which chapter it is, maybe the end of 2, but evanslily's name appears along with thanks. I realize she edited your story, but you probably would want to remove that. Some more editing is needed, however, in regards to sentence structuring and grammar.

tuty0201tuty0201about 11 years ago

Next chapter please

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

I hope these two heal each other. Both have serious issues that need to be dealt with and hopefully they don't hurt the other.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more.... Please!

I know you're sick of us demanding readers, but please.... Please give us more! I'd grovel if it would make a difference. Please!!

nohavegoodnamenohavegoodnameover 9 years ago

It's such a shame this story has been abandoned.

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