All Comments on 'Chester'

by PeachApocalypse

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This makes no sense, the guy's an athlete and he can't overpower the slob. Adrenaline alone would have gotten him free when removed from the chair. People don't go brain dead when being raped, they don't become sex maniacs, they have murderous intent. So that whole, " if you sign the contract, you can cum" line is just bullshit. He would have waited him out and beat Cheaters ass. Not a bad premise, but the lack of a realistic scenario ruins it. One minute he's restrained, the next minute not, but he doesn't do anything when he's free. Again, adrenaline would have old Chester hoisted by his balls and not sleeping in the shower.

wirtydordwirtydord2 months ago

No idea why people can't just use suspension of disbelief while reading erotica, which seems like the one place you should definitely be using it. But anyway, this was fantastic as usual. I love your writing and your stories.

sm1982sm19822 months ago

Interesting story lol I wonder if Chester’s study was created from the start with Brad in mind. In love or lust with a test subject.. And Brad, learning about the sensations that can come from his prostate.,

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

I read everything you write! You write well!

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