All Comments on 'Childhood Best Friend Ch. 03'

by Dash91830

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Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Time To Leave

Time to leave this story after this chapter and quit following this writer. Just not for me. Cheers

Bham487Bham487almost 2 years ago

Just such a stupid writing style and it’s not even original. All these stories are just copied from other writers, but what can you expect from someone who finds these stories interesting.

Dash91830Dash91830almost 2 years agoAuthor
You haven’t written any story of your own

So don’t critique writing style when you’ve got no proof that you possess any. I simply reversed gender stereotypes. That’s all I had to do to write my works. There has never been any need for me to copy from someone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved the story especially farting aspect.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved the story especially farting aspect.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

There is definitely something wrong with your brain

Dash91830Dash91830almost 2 years agoAuthor
And how would you know something is wrong with my brain?

Unless you are the psychiatrist who did my mental evaluation, I'd suggest you keep that mouth shut since you don't know what you are talking about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I wish there was more

ireadliteroticaireadliteroticaover 1 year ago

... what... what the fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So good, loved it! Thanks again for the wonderful stories!

other2other1other2other111 months ago

hmmm, I guess I’m struggling a little with this. The word ‘love’ is used here, but I doesn’t feel like love. Yes the characters are screwed up (royally) but I can’t feel any real love coming from Sidney.

I get that sometimes the female is dominate, and some guys are submissive. But it wasn’t just humiliation, it was the disrespect that she shows towards him. At no point does she do anything for him.

The worst thing is that neither of them will ever be truly happy, without respect everything else is an illusion. And his parents, hi mother, she is disgusting. Btw - Did the bitch cheat on him, i bet she did, again she is a horrible person.

Now all of that being said, I do appreciate the effort going into writing this. I felt the need to read it all the way through even if I found that Sidney was a horrible person that deserves no true happiness in her life

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Honestly if I were Jake I’d shoot the bitch and her cheerleader friends

OlsterOlster9 months ago

claire just disappears?

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