by Dash91830
Time to leave this story after this chapter and quit following this writer. Just not for me. Cheers
Just such a stupid writing style and it’s not even original. All these stories are just copied from other writers, but what can you expect from someone who finds these stories interesting.
So don’t critique writing style when you’ve got no proof that you possess any. I simply reversed gender stereotypes. That’s all I had to do to write my works. There has never been any need for me to copy from someone.
Unless you are the psychiatrist who did my mental evaluation, I'd suggest you keep that mouth shut since you don't know what you are talking about.
hmmm, I guess I’m struggling a little with this. The word ‘love’ is used here, but I doesn’t feel like love. Yes the characters are screwed up (royally) but I can’t feel any real love coming from Sidney.
I get that sometimes the female is dominate, and some guys are submissive. But it wasn’t just humiliation, it was the disrespect that she shows towards him. At no point does she do anything for him.
The worst thing is that neither of them will ever be truly happy, without respect everything else is an illusion. And his parents, hi mother, she is disgusting. Btw - Did the bitch cheat on him, i bet she did, again she is a horrible person.
Now all of that being said, I do appreciate the effort going into writing this. I felt the need to read it all the way through even if I found that Sidney was a horrible person that deserves no true happiness in her life