All Comments on 'Chloe and Allen Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Long awaited and much appreciated. Just in time for the holidays. Thank you, your story continues to be my top favorite. Can't wait for chapter 10.

peachycakespeachycakesover 3 years ago
So good!!

one of my favourite chapters, maybe or may not have had two or more orgasms while reading.

I love it Daddy, can't wait to do it all with you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

I have followed this from chapter one right through and the build up was incredible. Very well written throughout and one of the best stories I've read on here. I'm desperate to read the concluding chapter!! Is there an ETA on chapter 10??

greasedsilvergreasedsilverover 3 years ago

Has it been long enough to wait for chapter 10 yet? I've read the series twice now stalking while waiting. *he taps his foot impatiently... *

HlirthingHlirthingalmost 3 years ago

Please tell me you haven't abandoned this story! This is the best one I've ever read!

MillstoneMagnetMillstoneMagnetabout 2 years ago

Is this a trick? I enjoy a slow burn incest love story as much as the next pervert. But 30 pages of build up and then you never actually get the cock inside the girl? You just leave us hanging? Very disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

please finish this story

Kolby9inKolby9inabout 2 years ago

Absolutely amazing great job

greasedsilvergreasedsilverover 1 year ago

AAAAAARRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGG !!!!!!!!

Please get with it, man! Chapter 10 can NOT come soon enough. Please?

lovedefactolovedefactoover 1 year ago

Please publish chapter 10!

Sonnyw55Sonnyw557 months ago

I gave it a three this time because adding Amanda in between them wasn't as enjoyable for me. Chloe and Allen should continue to be just them.

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23-Aug-17: I just submitted Ch 10 to be published. I can't apoligize enough for the ridiculously long wait. I never intended to do that to all the readers of this story. I won't make excuses. Life just got in the way. (I'm nervous people will be mad and show it in ratings no m...

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