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At last, after what seems an aeon, he pulls out of her and steps away, and Chloe softly collapses, utterly undone by the whole evening; shuddering, crooning softly to herself, trembling and shivering, feeling his come oozing from her burning anus, sobbing a little every now and then, eyes tightly closed, biting her lips when she wants to wail, distressed and exalted, smiling through the tears in wonder at the aftershocks of the pleasure that had ripped through her, in the same moment wanting to die at the shame of it all.
She is barely aware of the rest of the evening - being dressed, wrapped in some sort of shawl, held by M or D, helped into a taxi; it all takes on the character of a dream.
She comes a little more to consciousness during the long-seeming ride - the shame creeping up on her again as the presence of ecstasy fades, but then, thankfully, drowsiness overtakes again.
Wakened by a crunch of gravel, cool air, she is half carried by someone - strong - a man; warm, luxurious feeling, thick carpet, soft lighting, lifted upstairs - still the man (a little stir of resistance here, weak and quickly hopeless, given up on, vague expectation of further sexual usage, unfulfilled), a soft bed, blissful unconsciousness...
- COMMENTS
greybishopabout 4 years agoUnfortunately I read the first three installments of this story after also reading the first four parts of the same author's rather similar but far superior (IMO) "Sally turned" series; sadly this one pales by comparison (again IMO.) To me it seemed rushed and cartoonish, well written smut but not much more. Chloe's character development is quite limited (especially in comparison to Sally's) and the idea of her submitting to complete strangers after only a few hours, then allowing herself to be caned and anally deflowered, falls firmly into BDSM fantasyland. (Not saying it couldn't happen, but the odds of it realistically occurring seem awfully slim to me.) If the author decides to backfill why Chloe decided to go down this road I might continue reading about her, but otherwise I'll stick with Sally's story and also check out some of the author's other work. Gave each chapter so far three stars, which I thought was fairly honest - while I didn't really like these stories, I do think the author should keep on writing other stuff.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI like this kind of writing. It is very good and the English is excellent. I say, absolutely splendid even!
