All Comments on 'Chloe Steps Toward Submission'

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alexetlaurealexetlaureover 2 years ago

Very nice start, Chloe expressing her sub desires without really knowing where it could lead her. I like it and hope we do not have to wait to long before the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Optimistic but cautious.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

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I enjoy writing, sometime for fun, sometimes for money. This is all for fun of course. I know the Literotica community wants everything written as a children’s book; without compound sentences, no paragraphs over three sentences, and simple structure (they would hate that sen...