All Comments on 'Chloe the Homewrecker Ch. 02'

So wikk the wife find out and bust his ass

I hope you won't wait to long to post the next chapter in this great series.

This for me would be just as hot if not hotter if you just write about chloe n the guy. Why does he need to be cheating on his wife?

"Will couldn't believe how cool she was being"...Excuse me? She is "the other woman" and when real life intrudes on the sex on side time she has no right to throw a fit. She wient willingly into that position knowing he was married. So her not throwing a tantrum doesn't make her "cool" it speak of the mistress just like she is.

And Will. What a jerk. His wife's mother has had a stroke. She is obviously upset. But while packing up his things he is making Chloe promises. Does he call his wife and try to keep her calm or show any sort of real decency? No he is texting Chloe and already planning another hook up.

Will is the type of character that I want to watch fall flat on his ass and lose it all.

As far as the sex goes, you've certainly got it down pat - hot, erotic couplings all the way and very enjoyable. Well done!

But as far as the two cheats themselves go, they've been written as a couple of selfish and unlikeable little bastards, and I can't help but want to see him end up divorced and sued into a trailer park and poverty alongside his sex toy. They can have all the hot sex they want without the burdens and privileges of marriage and respectability. Maybe that's the point of calling this "Chloe the Homewrecker".

Storywise, I'd like to see them both wrecked. After a few more episodes of good old delicious sex, of course.

They are both selfish jerks, which is typical of two people in an affair. Will takes the cake on selfish though. His mother in law had a stroke and he is telling the other woman that he is "there for her". What's worse is that he KNOWS he should be focusing on his wife at that time but he can't. He can't even put his chilodren first. He is fixated on a womanchild who probably wouldn't give him the time of day had he been just an average Joe.

Like the Anons I hope they both get what is coming to them. Karma is a bitch!

Perhaps if Esther took better care of her husband in bed, he wouldn't be fucking out all night fucking someone more willing. I look forward to reading more about this bored husband revived back to life by this hot little homewrecker.

It is a great story. Keep it up...you have had enough time to recharge the mind. Your readers await the next chapter. "Will" couldnt wait 9 days and we are patiently waiting since December....? :)

Hot hot hot

The pacing and narrnarrative are pitch perfect

This is amazing, please write more!

What next? How does Chloe ensnare him?

I loved this until he acted like his kids were a mere inconvenience maybe he doesn’t want to be with his wife fair enough that’s his choice but his kids are innocent I think having kids in these stories ruins it for me anyway.